My writing challenge has been… somewhat successful so far. I have managed to write what could pass as a story Monday through Friday, except I finished Thursday’s story on Friday and didn’t write another one… A small failure there, but I’m going to try to write a story today or some other weekend to make it up.
My word counts:
Day 1: 100 words
Day 2: 778 words
Day 3: 1,204 words
Day 4: 711 words
Day 5: 583 words
Day 6: 564 words
Day 7: 505 words
Day 8: nothing yet :(
It’s hard, but at least I’m getting practice. I’ll be happy if I end up with one or two good stories by the end of the month. Hopefully I’ll also have gained some more writing experience and confidence. At least I’ll have 23 bad drafts to work with. Maybe I’ll be able to come up with some ideas for salvaging them after they’ve “rested” a while.
Should I post one of my stories? I think I like my Day 5 story the best, though it’s by far the strangest. I didn’t have an ending in mind when I started, which is something I’ve been trying to stop doing. It was inspired by this picture and, uh, my toilet. (My toilet has problems… it likes to keep running and making noises. It was driving me crazy on Tuesday.) I haven’t been writing titles for these… I should probably start doing that.
There is a noise that won’t stop. It’s aggravating the man, picking apart his nerves one by one. He looks over at his wife, who doesn’t seem the least perturbed. Her face, as always, is ice-rink calm. She is a pianist, and while she doesn’t perform very often these days, he has often imagined that the music goes on playing in her head at all times. She was taught to play as a girl simply because she had the hands for it, and she eventually found herself in music school. At the moment those fateful fingers are noiselessly turning the pages of a catalogue. The man is reading yesterday’s newspaper. He couldn’t turn a page noiselessly to save his life.
“Jorie, do you hear that?”
Marjorie looks up slowly, as if awakening from the sort of deep thought the man didn’t think could be induced by glossy pictures of dresses. Her forehead creases a little, and her lips slacken before forming words.
“All I hear is the rain.”
He squints, listening. “It sounds like something dripping. But inside.”
She shrugs and goes back to her catalogue. He hears it again and feels the heat of anger seep up. It is definitely something dripping. You could torture people with drops of water; he had read about it. “You a took a bath this morning?”
She doesn’t bother to look up. “Yes.” He leaves the newspaper in a crumpled mess and stalks to the bathroom. The bath is dry, and the sink too. He comes back to the sitting room, frowning.
“Was it me?” She looks at him coyly.
“No.”
“I haven’t heard anything.”
He jumps up. “There it is again!” He strains his ears, ready for another drop.
“William.” She gives him her best charm-school smile. “Please just sit down.”
“But I have to find it,” he murmurs as heads to the kitchen. He studies the faucet, retightens the handles.
“I thought you wanted to relax today.” Her voice drifts in, persistent, cloying.
“That’s what I’m trying to do!” he shouts back.
What she says next is softer, but he can still make it out. “I suppose we’re supposed to be happy, aren’t we?”
Will tears through the rest of the house, searching for the drip, drip, drip. It seems to be getting faster. He stops at the closed door of the music room. How can that be? This is where the sound is coming from. He rushes in, and his shoe squishes on wet carpet. He stares at the flooded floor, then his eyes work painfully up to the ceiling. It is swollen, yellowing; it looks infected. He backs up, afraid it will choose this moment to give way.
Marjorie drifts down the hallway, following the trail of his shouts. He whips around and snarls into her glassy lake face. “Did you know about this?”
“I may have noticed. You know I don’t play very much anymore.”
“You played yesterday!” She nods, as if considering this. “Why didn’t you tell me?”
“Well,” she says, “I didn’t see it as much of a problem.”
“Didn’t see it as – Christ, Jorie.” His anger rushes out of him, leaving him empty. “This room is ruined now. It’ll probably need to be demolished.” He runs a hand through his hair and shuffles back to the sitting room. “I don’t know where we’re going to put your piano.”
He can just barely hear what she says next. “I suppose this is supposed to make me sad, isn’t it?”